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Flowing
My emotions of death and despair
Frequently
Sorrow encompasses my life
Dreams
My only escape
And in that dream plays
The requiem of my life
Tears
Corroding away my mask
Anger
My only way out until……
Peace
Takes my heart
Weeping
Lets my soul free
Hatred
No longer rules me
Sanity
Takes place in my thoughts
Reason
Quenches my desire and
Life
Fulfills me
My requiem
Now not just a dream
Becomes my everyday story
In which people listen
And find reason
For
Themselves
©2007-2009 ~wasus
:iconwasus:

Author's Comments

i wrote this while listening to, lux aeternia by clint mansell,
it is a sad but inspiring song also known as requiem for a dream but when i wrote this i had no notion of the name in my mind, and then when i read through it i was surprised at the references. well i hope you like it

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:iconxxgushingvelvetxx:
wow, very well written. descriptive and a lot of complex language and wording put in the perfect place. one to definately favorite and re read

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I don't suffer from insanity, Insanity Suffers From Me.
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:iconwasus:
thanks :)

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I reach out and grab a hold to my lifeline. But I will always reach back and pull you to safety with me.
:iconfoxoftruth:
How exquisite. If only my mind could escape its torment. Your mind truly is a sound one.

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"You've got more brains than all of us together even if-"

"Even if I am twisted and warped I am smarter then all of you. And someday I will prove it! Someday you-with all your strength and charm-all of you, will call me master!"-Tanis and Raistlin
:iconeviltt:
You have no idea how beautiful your writing is dear! You really are a healer! :hug:

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~* We're not retreating, we're simply advancing in a different direction.
:iconimnotanazi:
Me gusta! (gong sounds) Your work once again amazes me. This is a little more emotional than some of your latest stuff... I like lines 9 + 10

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:iconwasus:
yeah emotions played a huge role in this one.

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I reach out and grab a hold to my lifeline. But I will always reach back and pull you to safety with me.
:iconwasus:
thanks love.

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I reach out and grab a hold to my lifeline. But I will always reach back and pull you to safety with me.
:iconwings-03:
I can't get over how amazing you write

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الله أكبر :heart:
:iconwasus:
well thank you

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I reach out and grab a hold to my lifeline. But I will always reach back and pull you to safety with me.

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